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Posted 7/29/2010 4:56 AM (GMT 0)
I'm in lots of pain tonight, because I (shock!) opened a window from a less-than-ideal angle.  So I guess I'll get on the poetry bandwagon.

Rage fills my soul,

Hatred of this thing that won't let me DO!

Can't get it out -

Kicking, punching, running, jumping,

Dancing freely,

All forbidden long ago.

Absorb it deeply,

Push it down,

Make it into something else:

Acceptance, transcendence, wisdom,

A truce with my enemy.

Can it ever be?

Achey

Posted 7/29/2010 2:03 PM (GMT 0)
Achey, I liked it...it was a good release for you. Writing it out is theraputic.
Poetry is a form of journaling and it does get a person's creative side flowing. I
write poetry about everything and found it a good distraction to pain.

Hope you feel better my friend!

Hugs, Robin
Posted 7/29/2010 2:05 PM (GMT 0)
Hi Achey, Sorry you were in pain last night, hopefully it is better today. I loved your poem though I can relate to it in so many ways. Prayers that your feeling better.
Gentle Hugs
Shirley
Posted 7/29/2010 2:09 PM (GMT 0)
Great poem Achey.

I used to write all the time when I was younger but haven't wrote anything in 11 years since my father passed away.

Thank you for sharing with us.
Posted 7/29/2010 8:54 PM (GMT 0)
Achey,

Nice poem. A true expression and representation of what this thing does to all of us. Feel better cool   Heather

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