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UserANONYMOUS
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Posted 12/28/2014 2:36 AM (GMT 0)
As promised, I wrote my poem before the year finished.
I'm not poet but I gave it a try...
Just A Dream
I hear your voice in the distance
I turn around
But all I see is fog
I listen and hear your voice again
I begin to walk but your voice is fading
I stop and panic
Where’d you go?
Why are you leaving me?
Talk to me please…
But it’s silent.
In the distant, I hear your voice again
I listen carefully and walk towards it
I’m coming, I begin to run
I could hear your voice getting closer and closer
My heart starts to beat quickly
I’m eager to see you
The fog begins to clear
I begin to see you
You voice gets louder.
‘I am here my child’
I stop… ‘Dad… I’m coming’.
As I take the next step,
I step off the edge of the cliff
I’m falling...
I’m jump and I awake
It’s not real, it was all just a dream.
But it was nice seeing dad again…
By UA
UA
Sometimes i am me (HT)...
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Posted 12/28/2014 7:02 AM (GMT 0)
NICE WORK. :) you kept your promise. i respect that.
Charmy
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Posts : 774
Posted 12/28/2014 7:46 AM (GMT 0)
What a nice surprise on this Sunday morning. Well done! You really kept me in suspense from beginning to end. Hope to read more of your poems in the new year.
UserANONYMOUS
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Posted 12/29/2014 1:38 AM (GMT 0)
Thanks HT and Charmy.
I always try to keep my promises. I try to make only promises I know I can keep.
I get angry when someone makes a promise and they break it
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UA
Sometimes i am me (HT)...
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Posted 12/29/2014 1:42 AM (GMT 0)
i hear ya.
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