Just a moment in time, I wrote these feelings down

Deacon Blues

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Joined : Oct 2006

Posts : 324

Posted 2/18/2013 1:50 PM (GMT 0)

3-24-11
When I am

Free I can smell flowers,

See colors in the sky

Taste life

When I am

Captive I struggle to see the sun through the dust

Feel alone and listless

Burn with desire

To be free once again-dB

BnotAfraid

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Joined : Apr 2012

Posts : 8865

Posted 2/18/2013 5:03 PM (GMT 0)

Very nice Poem. Use poetry as an out Deacon, it can help you stay emotionally balanced.

Peace
Trina

bayoub2

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Joined : Sep 2006

Posts : 2861

Posted 2/18/2013 5:25 PM (GMT 0)

Like it alot Deacon

I have started writing too-I have one chapter done-lol...it might turn into a short story, but I feel like I have one story to tell.

We shall see

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